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Reviewed By: AmandaFay! On: January 31, 2011 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this so much! I was kind of sad when I got to the last chapter and the story wasn't finished! |
Reviewed By: kede211 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2010 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please finish
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Reviewed By: kung-fugirl On: February 06, 2009 13:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i hope you can continue the story it was getting good! update soon please! ^-^
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Reviewed By: magialuna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 10:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very curious what happens next, especially after that author note! I do hope you continue this fic! It is very different and quite good.
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Reviewed By: BelovedOblivion On: August 07, 2008 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you continue this story. I noticed you havnt updated since 07 so im hoping you didnt give up on it. I love it!
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Title: GREAT JOB!!!
Reviewed By: ladydeath4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 11:03 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT JOB!! i love the movie labyrinth and i was looking 4 some fanfiction on it. and i must say you did very well and i love all the twist you did in the story. please update ASAP!!!!! can't wait till you do ^_^
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 02:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The door part, you spelled "Which" wrong. Its a good plot and you know, it would be quite easier to read if you spaced the paragraphs from the person's speech so its not clumped together. I know I find it MUCH easier to read when there is spacing between paragraphs and people talking. :) Overall, pretty nice. I've just been getting into these "Labyrinth" fanfictions lately. They're pretty nice. :) I hope my review helped some.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... It's been so terribly long since I've read a good, dark, NC fic! I am so totally grateful to you. Please, PLEASE update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Lokiale On: September 15, 2007 05:28 EDT
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You really should post up those last chapters. You've got all your readers hanging and pining for more! (Most people don't review, but you do have more hits than any other labyrinth fic) So... pleeeeease? :) You write very well
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Title: update
Reviewed By: truth filled lies On: July 23, 2007 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 03:05 EDT
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Love the way the story is going. Its SO in character! ITS AMAZING!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: rosegoddess9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 07:38 EST
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I can't wait for the next chapters to be put up, this story is so good! ^.^
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Title: Teaser
Reviewed By: Dragonfire_fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 22:35 EST
Comment/Review:
Yours so cruel... I think jareth is rubbing off on you.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: ixmyeyesadorehim [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 08:23 EST
Comment/Review:
I love this story, please keep it up!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Dragonfire_fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 21:36 EST
Comment/Review:
Your doing a great job and I love what your doing with the characters!! I grew up on this story so it's sorta nice to see it becoming adult so it can keep growing along with me.
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