Title: Wow . . . .
Reviewed By: Princess Zel On: January 25, 2007 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly, your plot is great, but they way you type and such is hard to understand. Like when you type 'Two', don't type the number '2' because most viewers look for how you type. Secondly, when one person is talking, and finishs, you start another paragraph for the next person to talk. While on that subject, when someone is thinking and such, try to start a new paragraph everytime a new subject begins. It makes it much easer to read and comprehend. Thirdly and Lastly, try and use your commas and period more suffisciently. Overall, it has a good plot. But many, many errors in typing and grammar.
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