| "Sealed With A Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: HEY!!!
Reviewed By: LilMonkeyThing On: January 31, 2007 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey well um..I really did like dis one-shot lemon fic out of all the one-shot lemons i have read so far...and trust me when i say that i have read alot....so anywayz i had forgotten bout the bag and the about the epilogue, it can also have him gradguating and then some months later have them get married.....oh yeah to make it as good as this one...make that little Jennifer gurl do somethin stupid and for Kagome to Kick her ass...u know u did say that she made some boy cry and sae was a tomboy...besides you she looks different and u put that she said she was still the same person inside....well these are just some suggestions....if you have something better...PLEASE write it down ASAP....Thank you for writing dis story and oh yeah i almost forgot to say dat YOU are the FIRST one that i leave a comment for on MediaMiner and also leave a comment so long on anything so yea go ahead and feel special...^_^...everybody does it..lol hope you write epilogue soon...laterz
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww that was sweet, fun, and sexy! I would have probably stormed off just like Kagome, but leave it to Inuyasha to follow her home. It's always good seeing Inuyasha playing his cards right! Steamy steamy, great writing, very fun! Thanks!
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Title: It's the RING!!!
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me tell you that I really, really enjoyed this one-shot! It was romantic, angsty, intense and sexually charged!!! I know that has to be the ring in that bag. It's gotta be! Can't wait until the epilogue! Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: Kathy Le On: December 11, 2006 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just one question, what was with the paper bag?
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Reviewed By: maketchup1018(not signed in) On: December 10, 2006 19:02 CST
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Wow that was a sweet romatic one shot. I loved it. But I wonder what was in the bag...
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Reviewed By: kireinakao On: December 10, 2006 16:26 CST
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that was really good! I'm so interested in that bag tho... i was thinking it was condoms, but I guess not. what could it be??? hmmmm.... nice work on this one.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 15:15 CST
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even though i know you'e a sess/kags girl you do write the most wonderful inu/kags lemons, especially when their for our girl! now i have to know what's in the bag. i was thinking he ran out and got condomes since the first time they were gonna go at it, they didnt' have any. i was mistaken. i do love your one shots.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this was sooo good.
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