| "Ranma 1/2 -- Out in the Open: Ranma and Akane's Retreat (Author's Cut)" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god, your stories are so epic! I just want more Ranma stories from you now! Heck, Ranma, Cowboy Bebop, Kenshin, InuYasha, Outlaw Star, I'd read fanficts by you of any Anime I watch. I just don't watch Sailor Moon, and by not watching I know I'd miss so much that it'd be a shame to degrade your work like that... It's hard to put into words how much your stories rock, and as long winded as they are for one shots, at the end I just keep wishing there was more of it to read!
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh, listen man, i uh, don't know how to tell you this.......... seriously, i dont know how to say it; do YOU know how to say TOTALLY FRIKKIN AWESOME in japanese? ah well, forget it. this was totally frikkin awesome, and really balances the comedy and the romance. great job; you can only imagine my jealousy.
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Title: I like it!
Reviewed By: Ranma-sensei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great - you really have the hang of it. Just: as the story continues, you got a little sloppy concerning spelling & grammar. But seeing as the story is so enjoyable, that's not important. You are so GOOD at this stuff, I'm jealous. I'm not really into this mushy stuff, and it's hell for me to write such scenes. While I want to know how it could go further, maybe your story should stand by itself; after all, unintended sequels tend to turn out bad. Keep up the good work! ^^
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Reviewed By: souichirobaeza [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, i love it...one of the better Ranma stories i've read before
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was well wriiten and although it was a pornographic it wasn't overly vulgar. (see i am not even good at spelling myself.) overall very well done.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 22:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it.
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Reviewed By: xXdonutsXx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 15:19 CST
Comment/Review:
AWESOME!! i love it!!! i think ur an amazing writer!!! keep up the good work!!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Neon Ronin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the better one-shots I've read in a long time. Very nice way of keeping them both in character, as it were, and I thought the way the Wrecking Crew barged in towards the end was nicely done. I've tried my own hand at writing a Ranma fic or two, though I could probably improve on my style a bit more now that I've read this. Nice work; if you could take a glance at my work in return I'd appreciate it.
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Title: Good Work
Reviewed By: Weapon-01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a hardcore ranma fan, but it was damn fine writing. I don't personaly mind long fics either, so the only thing that really prevented a 10 mark was that (as stated) I'm not a ranma fan. Been a fan of your writings since I found a fic of yours on ASMR site. Keep up the good work!
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