Reviewed By:MazeSpeed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2012 20:20 EDT Comment/Review: I love this story please update!
Title: A good start Reviewed By:tubaotaku18 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 14:55 EDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: You have a very good storyline going so far. Your grammar and organization need a little work, but you've got a good imagination to keep your story going. You might also want to expand situations and limit POV shifts slightly. I look forward to reading more of this story when you continue it.