| "Penance" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: yume3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 00:31 CST
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This is a great squel. To bad you never say what happened to L. Oh well, i'll just think him and Raito are living, as happy as those two can get, somewhere. I really did enjoy this story.
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 00:34 CDT
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lol ok disregard what I said before... i was only like a few paragraphs into it when i wrote it... it doesnt end like this at all lol, its a kind of what if senario, I GET IT!!! lol, i'm sorry, i'm slow... but its really good, i really liked it!
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 23:24 CDT
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really liked it, only had one disatafaction with it (cause i'm always persice) but Kira's daddy died before Kira did... lol other than that, its really good!
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Reviewed By: Kirie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 16:37 CST
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Loved it, just as good if not better than Jusitice. It's just so heart breaking! I almost wish that you'll write a third story in which we find out it's all just an elaberate hoax and L and Light are off somewhere living happily ever after... But would I like the story as much if something like that happened? Well, I suppose L and Light could never really live happily ever after though could they? Their just too... seperated. Once again a wonderful fic! I look forward to anything new you may write in the future!
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 19:16 CST
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Loved it, my second time reading it. Are you going to write a L perspective?
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Reviewed By: kotay3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 04:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what happened to L ...Lovely sequel to "Justice". Mello and Near are so cute together. The melancholy that lies within the very core of the story effects the reader in a way that, well in lack of better words, angst, wouldn't have been able to. I hope ya'll find the inspiration to write a third story. Keep up the good work!
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