| "Games of Deception" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: SilverDrache On: January 27, 2008 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! You are absolutely amazing at this kind of writing. I am begging you to please continue on with this type of story. Please!
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Title: cat happy
Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cat happy is realy happy that you wrote this fic thank you so much and i think it would be so cool if you did make it into more
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Reviewed By: Nobodies Perfect - Not Even You On: April 22, 2007 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DDAAMMNN...Well that we very interesting...Not something I expected from Keiko...But different...I'd rather it be something between just Hiei and Kagome but only add Keiko in there from time to time. I wonder what would happen if Kurama caught all three of them together. He would most likely join in with them beause of Yoko. Please if your muse cooperates continue this story. It would be funny if this all started out beause Yusuke couldn't give Keiko what she wanted. So later on she goes to Kagome. But Hiei catches them so Hiei takes an interest in Kagome than Kurama catches all three of them so he takes an interest in Keiko. Wonder what would happen should Yusuke find out. IF you can Please CONTINUE. It has the potential to be so much more.
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Reviewed By: Hiei and the Cherry On: December 19, 2006 19:26 CST
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That was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too good not to continue!!! Please please please please please please please!! ^_^;;; Awesome work and plot. Never would have thought of it so it was incredibly interesting and you pulled everything together perfectly! Many, many congrats!
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Reviewed By: Heaven On: December 16, 2006 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, continue!
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 18:19 CST
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i throughly enjoyed this...eh...One-shot?...I hope that your muse does co-operate!
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Reviewed By: Shabazzz On: December 13, 2006 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue, continue, continue! Srry bad feedback I know but this story has such amazing potential, there's no doubt in my mind you should continue on with it. I can only pray that your muse co-operates with you because I'm already in love with this story! You're amazing & much love!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 04:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to see what you write next please update soon
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava (2 lazy 2 login) On: December 12, 2006 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ireally hope you turn this in to something more. Its awesome!
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Reviewed By: Bombi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as usual. I do hope it turns into more, love triangles are always lovely.
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Reviewed By: Seiai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 09:26 CST
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awesome story, i love the background you gave it. i would like if you turned it into a full story
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Reviewed By: Latch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 07:25 CST
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This is going to sound so very strange, coming from me, (particularly taking into light how vehemently I've attempted/succeeded bullying you into lengthening your one-shot fics,) but I sort of like this as a single go. Of course I wont complain if you lengthen it - your plots are always positively delectable. ;3 Kagome was so.. wanton! XD I do like your portrayal of Keiko, though. It seemed so very oddly... in character. Oddly, since her character is such a little miss. Well done. :) (I do wonder if you recognise me by 'voice' alone, considering you wont recognise the name. Ho, hum.)
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Title: Ch. 1
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was super awesome, i hope ur muses cooperate, and send more chapters out. :) -Mitsuko
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 20:42 CST
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damn
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