"An Unexpected Surprise" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: good job!!!! Reviewed By: dramafreak000 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 11:00 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: you should make Itachi come into tis fanfic!!! it would be even greater!!!But still great fanfic...but needs more hentai!!!
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 14:53 CST Comment/Review: HEY BOO!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!! dont know what im leaving a comment about but ill leave one any way but its great i love it its alsome so keep on writing you poet you
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Title: HI^_^ Reviewed By: AKACHAN CHUX [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 09:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: IT'S REALLY INTERESTING, YOU SHOULD CONTINUE WITH IT. VERY FUN STORY^_^
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Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 13:31 CST Comment/Review: not bad. Interesting how everything's working out... :) poor Naoko. I hate forced marriages... v_v anyways, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: sasukelova1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 22:23 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: awsome story is way cool!!Update soon Plz!!!!!!!
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Title: THE FIRST! Reviewed By: Hello lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 07:25 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm surprised that no one has reviewed to this stroy yet! It's really good... although... there is a lot of cussing going on, but what the hell! Everyone cusses! UPDATE!
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