"Time Rift" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 21:31 CDT Comment/Review: WOW!!! What an ending totally unexpected, Well I thought so anyway. Thank you for such an entertaning story. I loved how you tied Mir and sango into the ending (prologe). I really enjoied it!! can't wait to read more or your works!!
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Title: OOOHHH!! Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 16:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Thank you for another thoughtful chapter. can't wait to read the last one! hope to read more of your stuff!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 10:39 CST Comment/Review: That was a great chapter! I really feel sorry for Inu. to have to make that realization. . . today must be the day for good story updates. I must say that you did a good job on this fic. I liked the fact that you stayed on subject and didn't jump all around with your story. and I HAVE to give a cheer for mom! she was great to help you out. mom's are great that way, and it's always neat if you have a mom that shares an intreast in what you do. my mom was always cool that way when i was in school. she and I loved writting stories together. can't wait for the ending!!!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 13:55 CST Comment/Review: that so can't be the end!!!! Please add more I know that there has to be more. I WILL sit patiantly at my computer waiting until next time!!!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 16:14 CST Comment/Review: WOW!!! cliffy!! What will happen in sess uses inu and Kikko uses Kaggs!! can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: xMaex [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 21:38 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good fanfic... what is that evil clay pot planning????? AHHHH SCARY CLAY POT THING!!!! Anyway, keep on updating!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 21:33 CST Comment/Review: OOHH OOHH OOHH Good job! What will happen when they go to get the amulit!! What will Sess say when Inu tells him they already have a sacrfice even though it's not what Inu thinks!! Wow! please keep up the good work!
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Title: Keep up the good work Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 09:21 CST Comment/Review: Just wanted you to know that I thought that this is a very intresting story. Please don't give up on it cuz of lack of reviews. I just read all that you have posted and it would be a shame it leave it unfinished.
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Title: still awesome Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 15:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I still love this story!! I wonder if the subjugation three times will work?? hhmmm... Very nice. =) I'll be awaiting the next wonderful update!!!
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Title: I love it! Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 19:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story so far! It's very well written. I hope to see another update soon!
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