"Masks and Smiles" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: vesper On: April 14, 2007 13:36 CDT Comment/Review: Okay, I just read all that was written, and I think you've got an intresting story. I like where your going with it and how you keep facts hidden, I'm anticipating the finish. I think that your story could use a few more details, it would help with the setting and the mood of your scenes. that is all
| Reviewed By: Samantha KoS On: December 18, 2006 18:06 CST Comment/Review: Hurrayyyy!! ^_______^ I love Kakashi!! Although, poor Kakashi-sama... I'm interested in seeing where this will go--we all know ToriMiu-sama is infamous for her amazing female leads! ^^* --Keeper of Souls
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