| "The Most Delicious Sin" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: EvanesceMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Out of all the Zane/Syrus fics I have read, this is by far the greatest. The Obelisk Blue characters were so in-character as well. I bow to you! *On knees* I do that to writers I like.^^ This is actually one of the pairings I can tolerate. Others like Zane/Crowler or Alexis/Anyone...ugh. You are a good writer!
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Reviewed By: DancingKirby [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 15:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, this is far from my favorite pairing (and I really prefer het overall), but this fic is leagues beyond most of the fic for this pairing. For one thing, you actually know how to write decent prose, which is rare for the GX fandom in general. There were a few typos (like "loosing" instead of "losing"), but overall the grammar was good. P.S. Would you mind terribly considering writing a hassleberry/Syrus fic next? I think it's a pairing which doesn't get nearly enough attention, especially considering all the innuendo in the dub! XD And yes, I have this same username on LJ.
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy my gosh. Perfectly sinful, Wicabeth! I've been looking for more GX stuff from you since I read "Spring Fling." This is amazing! BTW: Major kudos for the "we don't tell mom" line.
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Title: catti-dono (baka deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai)
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Wicabeth...Im shocked!! Did not know you were into GX...naughty, naughty girl!! Even though Im more into Jaden/Siarus (or however you spell is name, damn)...interesting....Im so use to you doing Yugi/Yami, Jou/Seto...this had quite a different flavor...not saying I did not like it....I did...it was just odd...catti
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