Title: You should go into writing your own stories or manga if you like.
Reviewed By: silver_Sesshomaru_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For enjoyment factor i wish i could put a 20 but I can not which sucks. I find the story interesting and very deep into the storyline of the two siblings. However, you should have put that Kuwabara not only find sout about their mating, but of the relation they have had in the past.The story overall is interesting, exciting, and I enjoy reading all your stories. You have done a great story, not only with showing Hiei's feelings and how he has not only given is life to protecting her, but that they way he finally told his sister was very, not hard, but slow and steady.I am glad that you went into great detail of how the two were and not only that they did not have to have a 'runt' with their friends. However, my favorite of all parts is when you bring in Boton and how she feels for the young fire demon. I am sure this will be great help to you if you have noit only figured out this, but throught the series, Hiei is 82 years of age. It took some time for me to figure this out, but I am sure you will find some use for it if you have not already figured it out.But, i congradulate you on your well planned and well written story. I also wish to be excused for any mispelled words I have used.After all, I can't spell worth shit. >< Oh well.
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