| "A Proper Valentine's Day" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: sargentaaron2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, great story, so far, not ready the 4th chapter yet, I will be reading it when I get home. i love romantic stories, especially Hermione stories, shes my favorite character, but it's usually paired off with Harry. But this is different, is the character who is paired with Hermione in this story based on yourself?. Anyway Keepup the good work! You, do understand, your sotry is going to get the biggest following of horny teenagers ever, (if they all veer slightly from all the porn they watch). Regards, sargentaaron2004.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: sargentaaron2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Please don't stop here though, there is more to tell, maybe she can get Hermione into bondage or something along those lines. I want to know what those scars are from. Regards, Aaron
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Reviewed By: sargentaaron2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THank you for a beautiful story, I hope that it is not yet finished, if so, when will you post the next chapter?
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Reviewed By: nwtf On: September 17, 2007 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was fucking hot. Really fucking hot.
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Reviewed By: saruwatari_junko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job!! great work on Ryua and Hermione..and their need for each other..great hentai!! do hav more encounters between them..Cool!! do update more..!!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 23:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was cool. I hope that you put more to this....
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Reviewed By: taitnedheart On: August 03, 2007 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue with the story, there arent enough yuri stories out there and the few that are arent nearly as talented as you are.
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Reviewed By: crimson blade On: August 03, 2007 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing! deffinately keep going!
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Title: I like!
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 22:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story. You're good at writing these quick little spots. Are you going to have the girls go any further?
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it because you wrote it as a fan not a generic story using characters names. Could you get Ginny involved?
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