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Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why are you using so much slang in this story? It really takes away from the enjoyment of the fic. I've read some of your other stories and they are excellent. I just can't understand the excessive use of slang in this one. Is it to relate to a younger audience? Please don't take this the wrong way. It's not a flame, its just a plea to you to clean up the grammar a little. |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: November 08, 2002 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. I read it time ago, but I'm still hoping you will continue this fic. |
Reviewed By: DBZLOVER On: November 04, 2002 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. Plz hurry and try to put out the next chapter. It is so good. I wanna know what happens when Goten catches up with Bra and how he will explain it to her. |
Reviewed By: Bra herself On: October 29, 2002 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I abousolutley loved it! Only one problem. You need to get that next chapter up here! |
Reviewed By: Shantal On: October 22, 2002 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that is one of the few realy good B/G fics. Hope to read more soon. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura On: September 21, 2002 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even a great Zoid pilot is interested in what happens. Come on DUDE |
Reviewed By: Fate On: September 20, 2002 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, poor Goten and Bra. You've got to hurry and post the next chapter, I can't wait to read it. Please hurry and post. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Goddess of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 22:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Everyday i come on here before i go online and chat on aim and check to see if you have updated..ive done that fer like a month or something now!! hurry up i want more!!
~Goddess |
Reviewed By: Come on Update On: September 18, 2002 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE |
Reviewed By: =-| On: September 15, 2002 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COme on dude...dont leave me hangin |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 16:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
The perspective from which this is written is brilliant. It's good to read a fanfic which concentrates on the lady's experience rather than the man's or the interchanging. A unique piece of writing. I like it! |
Reviewed By: Goddess of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2002 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story~ love it! hurry and continue!!
~goddess |
Reviewed By: dreamberry On: September 01, 2002 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!! I'm so glad you updated! The story's great! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hurry please! And I know I probably said this last time but good pick of the song "I Want You Bad". |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It was truly a treat reading this today, I really needed it considering all I've been through this week.
Flaming Dr. Pepper? Jim Beam 151? Girl, I knew we had something in common! Back in the day (when I was single and free) those words were like heaven to me! I've actually seen some take a flaming Dr. Pepper down...it's not pretty.
Good work in this chapter EM! It really clears up what was the deal with Goten coming home with the lipstick on his shirt and all...I hope that someway those two cazy kids will patch things up. I'm not going to say "Update soon!" Because I know you're a busy little bee...so keep up the good work and thanks for the little dedication! It meant so much! :)
Later Tater! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2002 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) :)
You know what's funny is, I despise the G/B P/T pairings, but this..
*snort* GOODNESS!
Love it. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter ^_~ |
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