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Reviewed By: dreamberry On: July 24, 2002 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic and I especially love the song you're using. Its one of my favorites. I'm really looking forward to another chapter so please...hurry! |
Reviewed By: Elvia On: July 03, 2002 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... lets see, time to review... Okay well your style of writing got a 10 cause it's very unique. The phrases and plot lines are one of a kind. You know why you got spelling and grammar. It's pretty obvious. This fic is original because Goten actually tried to resist LOL! In most bra/goten fics he leaps at the possibility of a lay. You got another 10 for enjoyment because I love your racey fics! Good god is there any lemon you've written that isn't good?!! So overall my dear you are a 10++! See Ya Next Chappie!
~Elvia |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! How could Goten do that...!
Great chapter EM. Here are MY favortie highlights of this chapter:
*The Jerry MacGuire Line (You had me at hello)
*Using bath and body works, ne? I love that cucumber and melon myself!
*Vegeta talking about Bulma reporting him to CPS...too funny!
*Trunks 'unoffical' bachleor calendar
*And this unforgettable line:
"...the sweet candy of his mouth..."
it gave me the shivers!
This is definately worth staying up for! Thanx! :) |
Reviewed By: Usagi On: June 20, 2002 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
"lol"..thats all i got too say!;OP |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: June 05, 2002 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^! Go Bra! That was wonderful. I don't really have any constructive blab for you, cuz well you don't seem to need any. Well, from me anyways. ^_^ I think I'm going to have to find that book. Seems really interesting. ^_^ Please continue!
May your muse visit you many times. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2002 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...let me catch my breath.
When you said "the pootie tang eating contest" part, I jump up and was yelling like "Hell yeah!!" That was witty girl!
And the 100 percent beefcake...you describe Goten to the T!!! Great work...this really made my night!
Now I'm offf to read it again...:) |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2002 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
yo... this fic be tight like all get out |
Reviewed By: ssj8 On: May 28, 2002 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OF ALL TIMES, IN MY HOLE LIFE, THIS HAS 2 BE 1 OF THE BEST,(MAKE IT BIGGER LIKE "GOTEN'S WISH" (46 PAGES) THAT WAY YOU WILL BE MAKING US ALL HAPPY. GOOD JOB, BUT PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THANX |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: May 27, 2002 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez! I don't know why your fic isn't getting more ratings. I love this! ^_^ You're one of the best writers I've read. You wouldn't mind if I mentioned you on my little space at ff.net, would you?
silverdragon_eye@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Bra...what do you have planned? Well I guess we'll have to find out next chapter! Good work! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: cherryblossom0286 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2002 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PRetty good fic... keep up the good work :D hurry up and update already ok!? |
Reviewed By: Flame_of_Ignacious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2002 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great start to a story! now, You BETTER update SOON or i'll ki blast you! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2002 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! A GOOD Bra/Goten story! Update soon! |
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