| "The Botanist and the Beast" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: feathergriffin On: April 14, 2007 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I't me! (Obviously!) I took your suggestion to heart (how could I not, when I discovered that this spectacular story has been updated?) Anyways...O_O; I don't ever remember thinking that Sesshoumaru would be ripping off Donella's clothing anytime soon. Of course, he seemed to, er, enjoy himself ripping off her shoes. Maybe his subconscious or something. Practice, ya know. As always, your chapter was particularly enjoyable. I'm particluary enjoying wondering what Sesshoumaru's thinking about Donella's comments to her ancestors, considering some of the stuff he must have overheard, especially since she's in a cave, and his hearing is rather good. I'm also wondering what's going to happen the next time Donella and Kagome meet, since if I remember correctly, she did give some letters to Kagome to send. Whether her siblings are going to believe her or not should be interesting, or even if she's going to get anything back from them. Ah, well. Enough of my ramblings and musings. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, good luck with everything, since it seems that it has been more then hetic where you are. I hope you'll be able to work everything out!
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Title: sigh...
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 07:52 CST
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my heart stopped at the end of chapter fourteen and it broke when i saw tha tyou had not updated for a month..please come back, I spent all night reading this and i need the rest. I beg you! of course your life is more important so i hope you have a wonderful, smooth season, that allows you to grace us readers with this wonderful story.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 06:32 CST
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don't you just love how my reviews are filled with 'love'? at least you've put me into a good mood for the day! : )
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Title: me again...
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 06:31 CST
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I just finished chapter nine, and i just wanted to say i love your portrayal of jaken, seriously, he'd win best supporting actor right now. i loved your inuyasha cameo...kagome shoul dhave given her some pads, or shampoo, or something but next time i suppose. i'm gonna go read some more, but i just wanted to say again this is awesome. i noticed a few typos, but nothing serious...otherwise, perfection!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 04:48 CST
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I love this fic...chapter three had my eyes slightly watering and when i got to the end and read that you did not like it, i had to review and tell you how wonderful it was. I loved the paragraph about adrian, it was beautiful. I love how there are cliches in this story, but i still don't know what's going to happen. I love that your characters are real and intelligent and flawed. I love this story and i am only on the third chapter.
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Title: aw
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 20:13 CST
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I feel loved... lol. I rele love ur story. It's rele good!! Update soon please!! ^.-
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 16:57 CST
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Awww that was soo cute. I loved that chapter. I hope there's more fluff in later chapters. Well I hope updates don't slow too much, but I'll understand! Love ya!! *mwah*
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 09:01 CST
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I loved it! Love you Dear Alice bits, I was hoping for a kiss when Donella told Sesshomaru about misletoe, because I figured he would believe in the magic of it and want to stop it.
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Title: aw
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!! I want more. lol. PLEASE update soon. I love ur story so much. I give u perfect tens! LOVE YA!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 22:20 CST
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I just found this today I have enjoyed it Where else do you have it posted?
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story and ive got a great story for donnella to tell rin(if your interested)
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