Reviewed By: Nanishisummer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start, this has the making of a instresting story. Please keep writing.
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