| "Sleep" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: So Naughty....!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: January 10, 2009 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think my title speaks for it's self haha :D
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 22:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mm-mm! ;) Nice Lemon! You should definately write more of those! ^^ Good work!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi of Hikari (not logged in) On: April 17, 2007 16:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha, that was great. ^^ Funny and hot at the same time.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha1234 On: March 25, 2007 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is exacly how I think Ed would be in bed! This was a great one-shot and just what I was looking for^^ That's for writting it... With love, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: Arsenic_Dimentia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very hot! I love how Ed was so in-character, and so was Roy, even in his tired state. Hell, this had me gasping for breath, which is hard to do, because I was reading so fast and I forgot to breathe... -_-; I loved that position, and the dialogue was fun to read. X3 Excellent job! *faves*
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