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| "Bleeding Daylight" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 11:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohmigosh!!! I can't believe I read this and didn't leave a review!!! I guess I read it so long ago I had completely forgotten, thinking I'd do it later...Well, later seems to be now ^_^
First off, very, very, very sexy pairing. I agree that Marron and Vegeta are just about the strangest combination of people, but you managed to pull it off quite well. I think there is more there if you wanted to continue the fic though. (hint, hint, hint ^_~)
You made both Marron and Vegeta so passionate...Really awesome job. Once again I am left in awe of your ability to create a mood with you incredible vocabulary. It still amazes me all these stories later how descritive you are. What's your secret? ^_~
Well, I guess that's all for now. I hit the highlights, hopefully enough so that you can figure out how much I enjoyed this story. In fact, even though I read it several months ago, I was thinking about it just the other day. Most stories I forget within hours of reading them, especially fics mostly based in sex and with only one chapter. I give you two thumbs up. Total greatness. ^_^ Until next time, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: yamato86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of best most original stories I ever read. Please update:):):) | Reviewed By: DBZ chick [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*slaps forhead* I'm such a Baka! Yours was the wonderful lemon that I had read on FFN! *bangs head on desk* Baka! Baka! Baka! *sigh* Great, now I have a headache! Anyway, FANTASTIC job! This is so beautiful and well written! I wish you would continue it! |
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