| "Forgotten Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: xepher [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2011 13:18 EST
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when can expect more of this i really want to no |
Reviewed By: xepher [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2010 12:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok its good but to short to short to short chapters r to short |
Reviewed By: evilerthanyou On: July 19, 2010 03:14 EDT
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i thimk inuyasha's her daddy it's so obviouse except he doesn't remember and great story so far please continue
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Reviewed By: Koneko778 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 02:54 EDT
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i love this story, when are you going to continue?
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 10:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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hmmm. here's constructive comment i hope you'll listen^^: You should write the narrative parts in past tense, so be carefull with it, as in --she WENT, she RAN, she CRIED, clock CHIMED...etc ^^ that's the norm of the storytelling. the lines and still active doings that haven't ended you can still write with the tense you're using now though.Like he loves, souta was running... Otherwise i really like your idea. keep writing and i'll keep feeding your fuel with my corrections if you don't mind^^ i always find it interesting to help someone develope! you've some kick-ass potential!
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Reviewed By: Koneko778 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2008 12:24 EDT
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ok you must keep going... Sakura will eventually find out who her dad is right, and will Kagome make an appearence soon. Please... continue.
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Reviewed By: Koe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is abosolutly fantastic. I really hope you update. I've been reading fanfics for a while now and this is one of the best Inuyasha one I've read. Please, please, please update!!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 00:36 EDT
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Welcome Back! Well, I was close...Ruya of the Wire. hehehehe! Glad your writer's block has lifted! So, do we find out who's the daddy? Since the previous offer of a cookie was not taken, how about a bowl of ramen? No, too hot right now for that. Howsabout some ice cream? :D
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 22:41 EDT
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hummm, sounds like Yura of the Hair, but that can't be right, can it?? I'm hanging in to the end girl, no matter how long you battle writer's block lasts! way too many unanswered questions ;D
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_must_die2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 19:32 EDT
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Are you dead? I hope you aren't. I want to know what happens, why did Kagome seal Inuyasha to the tree?! PLEASE! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 19:21 EST
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thanks for the new chapter - so...is InuYasha a dad or what? If she was his daughter, shouldn't he be able to smell his blood in her???
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story. i reallu wanna know who sakura's father is!!! and and and I wanna know what happensssszzz!!!!!! update when you can! =)
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Reviewed By: star_ruler_eve [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 16:10 EST
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write more!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!! and who's sakura father!!!??? I'll give you a cookie if you tell me.......
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Reviewed By: Karin_Taiko On: January 05, 2007 09:54 EST
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Cool Story! So InuYasha truely forgot his feelings for Kagome, and completely forgot that bitch Kikyo! I Sakura his daughter?
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