| "Once Upon a Night..." Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 07:37 EDT
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OMG I LOVE IT!!! PLEASE RIGHT MORE!! IT A-FREAKING-MAZING!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 06:52 EDT
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Hee hee hee! What a nice surprise!! As soon as I saw a new chapter up for this story, I let myself re-read the last chapter, because I loved it so much. So, Inu, Kurama, and Sess (and I guess Sango) know that Hiei put a courting mark on her, right? Hmmm. Will Hiei sleep with her in her sleeping bag again tonight? I just loved the part about him ignoring the others and running his fingers through her hair and nuzzling her too many times to count. Heh heh! And Shippou, who had just been removed from her sleeping bag, woke up and asked "what is he doing in your sleeping beg?" LOL!! Awesomely funny! And her throwing the pillow at him and him throwing it back and hitting her in the butt with it -- nice! This was another good chapter. I like the emphasis you put on the way he protects her and tries to take care of her when she's hurt. And I can't wait for the wimpy wolf to blow a gasket!! Yay! thanks for the treat!!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 15:25 EDT
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oh way to go Hiei! But wont Kagome be pissed...or will she be charmed....
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Reviewed By: animebishieluver On: May 27, 2007 01:01 EDT
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you've got a few spelling errors, like 'dought' instead of doubt, but this is a good fic. keep it up!
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Title: missjay
Reviewed By: jem89 On: April 28, 2007 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I like how Shippo changed to look like Kagome. It really irritates me that Hiei gave her a courting mark without asking first, I mean could that be any more chauvanistic? But still this story is really great. Please update soon : )
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 10:50 EDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so Kawaii(Sp?) please update soon...
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so Kawaii(Sp?) please update soon...
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Reviewed By: professionaldreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fanfic. It's funny and provides great detail so you can really feel like you're there. ~Dee P.S. If you need a Beta reader, i'll do it for you.
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Reviewed By: Fub On: April 17, 2007 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much!! Please update asap!!!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 01:13 EDT
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UP DATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE IT!!!
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story and i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: grilka6363 On: April 16, 2007 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, but you don't update often enough!
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Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ohhh so he marker her w/o telling... what will Kagome do?!...ahh I will just have to find out next time. :D Anyway, hope you find your muse..cough I mean Beta, to continue the story!..its good.. ~update when ever..but soon, ...yea
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Title: once apon a night
Reviewed By: sins On: April 16, 2007 11:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YAY im so happy you updated!!! i cant wait for the next chapy
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