| "Once Upon a Night..." Reviews/Comments [ 107 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 17:03 EST
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Great work! I really loved it! Keep it up & update soon.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 03:14 EST
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Yay! I just love new chapters! I'm still feeling sorry for Inuyasha, though -- that cryptic message of Kurama/Shippou's was just so sad. Of course, you've already said Inu helps build the shrine, but I guess he gets stuck in the past. And Kurama/Shippou seemed sad about Inu and Kagome fighting -- what is that about? The young Shippou always seemed to find it funny. I loved the way young Shippou confronted Kurama and just let it go. Very wise indeed. And Miroku is so funny -- he's one of my all-time favorite characters because he just adds so much to the story. Loved the slight Hiei/Kagome interaction and Sango's thought about her and Miroku doing some matchmaking -- can't wait for that!! It really was ironically funny that he DID see her naked after everyone telling Miroku he isn't a pervert. LOL! New chapter next Tuesday, you say? All right!! I'll be waiting!
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Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: January 12, 2007 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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shippo? 0.0 what an unexpected event to occur.. i love the fic, Please Update Soon!!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 18:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon please!!! i love it so far!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 14:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God you need to so update soon. please.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 22:35 EST
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I bearly began to read this story and I already LOVE it. I't very entertaining and ... interesting. I like the whole Hiei/ Kagome and that Shippo turned out to be Youko from the future. I was kind of wondering wouldn't the whole going back in time affect the way the future is going to turn out????? I mean wouldn't it kind of stop Shippo from turning in to Youko????? This story has left many questions in my head. (?.?)I HOPE THEY ARE ANSWERED IN THE FUTURE BECAUSE I'M KIND OF GETTING CONFUSED.@~@(it's the good type of confused) Anyways back to the point...... THE STORY IS GREAT I'M LOVING IT AND KEEP UP THE GREAT no FANTASTIC WORK!!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 20:01 EST
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Yay! Loved the new chapter!! I'm so flattered you had me in mind when you posted it! You covered a lot of ground in that one, AND gave some ominous foreshadowing of events to come. (You're keeping me hooked so easily!) Yay for botan's eveil portal beneath their feet! Poor Hiei! He just couldn't help himself, could he? He had to cushion her fall -- but don't expect him to admit it. LOL! Kurama is relly in an interesting position, isn't he? I mean, Youko is related to her, even if it's not by blood, but Shuuichi isn't. Hmmm. Hiei glared at him -- Could he still be a bit jealous of Shuuichi? After all, HE doesn't see Kagome as a mother. (Sorry -- that thought just occured to me. What a weird triangle that would be! Maybe another story.) Loved it that Hiei annoyed her so much that everyone got a glimpse of her power when her aura flared. Loved Mrs. H wanting to spoil Shippou/Kurama! And you just made my gut clench when he told her to be sure to be extra nice to Inuyasha the next time she sees him. Oh! I just can't stand it! It's going to be so angsty, isn't it? So, Kurama will get to see a young Youko/Shippou. Could this encounter be why Shippou decides to change his name to Youko? Still can't wait to see how/why he becomes a spirit fox. And I'm looking forward to, and simultaneously dreading, finding out what happens so that Kagome leaves the Feudal Era and doesn't return. I can't forget what you said about Shippou not wanting to tell her because it might ruin her chance at happiness. Since the SDs are going back with her, I have to believe she's going to leave with them (HIEI!) after Naraku is defeated. But that cryptic statement makes me think there might be a reason why she wavers over deciding to leave or stay. Is it because of Shippou and something that happens to him? Can't wait for Inuyasha to meet her new friends and allies. Will he and Hiei end up competing for her affections? Oh, this is so good! And so fun, too! You're doing such an excellent job of storytelling with just enough hints to leave us panting for more. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 19:52 EST
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Oh, I'm liking this story. I can't believe that I just found it! Very well written and quite original, I can't wait for more! *excited already* ^-^
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Title: Once Upon A Night...
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 18:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 17:16 EST
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 21:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Also I just wanted to review twice on the same chappie because this is such a good story....... please update soon... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.. .................................
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 21:21 EST
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oh thank you for updating and the 50 points........pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee update soon...this was a really good chapter..I mean who would have thought shippo was youko kurama...very surprising...also very origial.....any ways....... with hiei on top.......(hiei is mine back off)(takes Hiei from you) (looks around then hands him Back to you..) (I only share with you if you update soon)pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee........................... also the dictionary(is that spelled right) is a great idea..please if you wish to.add one...any ways pleaseeeeee update soon..................................................................
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Reviewed By: ChaoticKittiex3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 18:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome. update soon. =)
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Title: Love the fic!
Reviewed By: Writerblocked On: January 05, 2007 21:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read what you've posted so far and it seemed like just any other Inu/YuYu crossover until you hit us with Youko being Shippo. I have never seen that before in all the fics I read (though now that I have I can't imagin why not). The confusion and chaos, along with some sweet mother-son enteraction has me completly hooked! Keep it coming!
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Title: Once Upon A Night...
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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