Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 17:40 CST
Comment/Review:
well written..... if you'd prefer, i'll go semi in-depth..... good character, and good descriptions of prevously made characters, showing the "signature" stances they each have, their own quirks.... also interesting was your own original character, how she felt about the whole buisness, the perspective of an outsider.... aslo i have to say excelent usage of an ending, it makes one want to read more, and stay to see if you post new chapters or stories.
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