| "The Joys of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 12:21 CDT
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This is a koo story ....but I don't think Sota could call Kagome him mother that fast but I could be wrong and all...... I wish I could be five again I got away with so much more back then ....yaaa (said with a heavenly bliss).....So you In bosten and you don't have this story with you and your dad don't have microsoft word....well I guess that means that an update soon is kinda out of the question am I right?...well it has been awile even if I haven't been the one waiting ...hehe...your last update was in June I believe that is about three months I'm thinking...well I hope you update it soon....XD....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon this story is great!
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Reviewed By: Latch [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 13:28 CDT
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Openoffice is good, free, writing program, if you need one. Just grab it from download.com. C: Have fun in Boston!
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Reviewed By: Torohaha On: June 04, 2007 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE your fic! The idea of Souta being Kagomes son is an entirely new idea (at least that I know of) and you are to be congratulated for your imagination! ^_^ There are a FEW spelling errors; 'ruff' should be 'rough' but other than that, this is an absolutely AMAZING STORY!!!!! Please keep it up! (hands a blue ribbon) Superb!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon....
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 23:54 CDT
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You're really moving quickly with the revision, aren't you? Yay! I liked the the little added bit of affection Hiei and Kagome displayed for each other. But how long has it been since since her father tricked her into leaving? I was thinking you had said 12 years, but in this chapter you said almost 2 decades. I liked the bit with Koenma banging his head on the desk. LOL!! Other than some typos and little stuff like that that none of can seem to avoid, it looks good. LOL!!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 17:21 CDT
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plz continue
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 04:49 CDT
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Well, the first two chapters sound good. I think you infused a little more warmth into Hiei's interaction with Souta, didn't you? I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story coming along.
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Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA __not logged in___ On: May 19, 2007 00:09 CDT
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What the Hell|?!?!?!?!?!?! what happened where'd all the chapters go?!?!?!? there was like....twenty...ok not twenty but at least eight or nine...what happened? are you revising?
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Title: xxxx
Reviewed By: sadx On: April 18, 2007 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i llig
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon....
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Reviewed By: pieisgood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this keep writing dude!! This story is totally AWSWOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things keep on heating up and I can't wait to read and see what happens, so I hope you update as soon as you can.
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