| "Intensifiers" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: sandrak On: February 23, 2007 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmm That was so hot. I loved that story plzplz write more. the characters are OOC but it was still good. You should have had a shower scene in here too *drool* LOL
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 15:30 CST
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I just wanted to say that, over the past few months, I have noticed the improvement in your writing abilities and want to encourage you to continue. Good job!....Snow
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Reviewed By: KELLY J On: December 31, 2006 15:20 CST
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I have to agree with the three out of character. As much as I love the two brothers, the idea of them together in this way is dumb. Inuyasha is too feminine and that should actually be the other way around. Inuyasha is hot, sesshomaru is beautiful, you get what i mean
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Title: (*smirk*)
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree that they were out of character, but it was a good story. Your words paint good pictures of what was going on. ::tears:: I'm kinda mad you stopped were you did, cause I was ready for more! -lol- But I can understand if you needed it done for Christmas. I had to keep myself from adding more to my story, cause it needed to be out! Keep going with your writing and I'll be watching for more lemons from you!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 21:00 CST
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This story is just very pleasing. I mean I LOVE it! I really could not keep myself from reading it. It was just calling to me. READ ME... READ ME. LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!
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Title: no way
Reviewed By: id have to agree On: December 26, 2006 21:14 CST
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I didn't like your summary, but I was curious. The story is bad. Not only are the characters out of character, but the story line is insulting to both straight people and homosexual. I have read some sess/inu stories and if it's convincing then i continue. this is just mindless porn. I wrote a review because I wanted you to know that there is more to writing than this. you need to work on this. this is a bad story
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Title: YOU SUCK
Reviewed By: SexyLady On: December 26, 2006 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo I'm guessing you believe in incest? That's pretty messed up, bro. Male stripper? Also his mate is his brother? What kind of sick freak are you? Seriously!!! I didn't even have to read the story.. The summary was enough. I even puked in my mouth a little. Please, keep your sick thoughts to yourself and your fucked up friends.
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Reviewed By: roarxd On: December 26, 2006 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so hot. made me ache.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great one-shot!! Those boys sure are naughty!! ^_^ I can't wait to read more of your other stories, so don't take too long to update!!!!
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Title: To a naughty Santa!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! I just read a naughty little one-shot! What a great Christmas gift! Even Scrooge would have a hard-on after reading that! Thanks and HAPPY HOLIDAYS~ B reading U!
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