| "A Complicated Violence" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: shinaraexe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Beautiful. I love how you made it PWP, yet at the same time were able to put endless emotion into it. There was thinking and consideration in it as well as sex and it allows readers to think and enjoy at the same time. A little angsty, but I'm an angst whore, so that will never be a bad thing to me. Gaara is the best. We all bow down at Gaara's feet in reverence because Gaara is so awesome. *worships in front of shrine*
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Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 23:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Yesh, very angsty. Good choice of sentence structure too. I love how you included so many feelings into one. beautiful
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it. words were well-chosen and they complimented the style. this is supposed to be a hentai fic but it came across as angsty to me, not as erotic as i hoped (in a good way. you could almost feel the loneliness. nice job.
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