| "Unrequited Feelings" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: sarahwardley x On: May 24, 2007 07:19 CDT
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hi its me sarah, long time no hear!!!! man! i have decided to read this fanfic again! you NEED TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!! you should post this up on fanfiction .net i'll review you on there ;0) anyways if you want i'd love you to drop me an email, i cant get on my mediaminer account its bullsed up but i remembered the title of this wickid story! (sarah_dbz@hotmail.com) if you ever want some help with ya writing just ask ill be happy to help. hehe oh i just realised i reviewed before with my email... oh well. anyways i loved the latest chapter, i didnt read that last time it was posted in feb, but please please its like may now (nearly june) update this fanfic again.... (is that enough begging) i'll make sure i come back and have a look! i need to know what happens next you meany! ;0) drop us an email if you update as i usuallu use ff now but i will definately make an exception now! updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx thanks xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Reviewed By: v_v On: March 20, 2007 11:49 CDT
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hey, how come u haven't updated yet... makes me sad v_v
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Reviewed By: yo;) On: February 28, 2007 10:30 CST
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its cool ur still writing... i kinda liked lucerfus's personality... yeah i wish there men like him out there, lol ;)
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Reviewed By: >. On: February 20, 2007 10:31 CST
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omg... *is speachless* >.
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Title: hi!!
Reviewed By: taking the long way home On: February 15, 2007 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude... this fic is becoming like an enigma to me... at first it was weird, but then all the characters came to life, and i was like... yay!! i still don't understan what is going on with bulma... is she like... going to die, ro something? she's hearing voices now... creepy...
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Reviewed By: wow... On: February 14, 2007 10:33 CST
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this is an interesting fic... i usually don't like to read AU, but this makes an exception ;)
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Reviewed By: thanks!! On: February 09, 2007 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know this kind of ssounds selfish of me, but i couldn't wait for a lemon!! and omg, i like that part when vegeta is making fun of the baby names, its so ironic, don't you think? i also liked the lemon, i liked how you portrayed Goku, and everything... update soon, you hear!!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: coach On: February 03, 2007 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up. it's a good story. update soon!
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Reviewed By: sarah w On: January 30, 2007 14:21 CST
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hey me again! great fic i love it! update soon! more b/v more b/v!!! more more more ;) you have some serious good writing talents so carry on and update soon! email me sometime sarah_dbz@hotmail.com laters! oh and review my fics!!!! :-) surfs up!
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Title: buggy
Reviewed By: buggypunch On: January 26, 2007 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...your story is so amazing and goes with the flow..dear author you really have talents and cannot believe that there are people out there who are reading your story and do not even write a comment, i hope that you will never quit and keep writing best stories ever. Your story has moved me and there is no other person who could have written better than you. I cannot wait for the next stories. You must be contracted as soon as possible, because you have talents and do not want to waste it away. I will help you publish your stories in MANGAS. Congratulations, I shall soon give you a call and let the whole world view through your passion talents.Once againg congratulations, the best fanfiction writer of all!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ^_^;; On: January 14, 2007 11:39 CST
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i like this fic very much ^^
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Reviewed By: nancy^^ On: January 04, 2007 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its ur friend again, lol... wow, it does look like a radditz/bulma fic, lol ^^;; but its cool nyway... alright i'll see u later jessy, XD... (hahaha, notice all the tens?? XD, lol!!)
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Reviewed By: animelover4everf***ers!!! On: December 24, 2006 17:19 CST
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update!! now!! XD XD XD XD XD XD
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