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| "Living Shrine" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: MxDragon On: June 30, 2007 17:26 CDT
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Que onda, que chido que has seguido escribiendo el fanfic de naruto, hace tiempo que no pasaba por aqui pero pues animo, estos dos ultimos chapters lo subiste bien rapido, sigue así... escribiendo como siempre. Tu amigo MxDragon
| Reviewed By: fm wave On: May 18, 2007 18:16 CDT
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kill list: sasuke and sakura are the only two i don't like.
| Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesomeee keep up the good work ill be waiting for your update.
| Reviewed By: AtlantisWolf On: February 16, 2007 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the fic; it's just that there are some confusing parts to it. This includes certain words, the meaning of which is not readily available or common knowledge. Also, there are a few problems with spelling and with spacing. Other than that, it is a great fic and an enjoyable read.
| Title: There she comes xD
Reviewed By: Muninn On: February 01, 2007 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well as soon as they don't give some information about if 1 is good or bad I gave you a 10 hoping that is the best xD hah yo yo wazzzzaaaap xD haha, I was reading the prologue and I was expecting the first chapter, you just make Naruto's personality come, and I'm so impressed about it, I have read some other fanfics and you just catch his essence, smiling and when he blush haha I love that and I hope that you can write the second part of this cuz I want to know more about Yu and what can she exactly do with her technics (that's right xD)... I wonder if she can be that pro... _RAINE KEEP WRITING (shpaw) *WHIP* _Hope that you don't overkill yourself like that again, you need to rest so if you can DO IT! _Waiting for the second part GIVE ME MORE TO READ AND TO BE THAT FREAKING AMAZED!!!! _Keep working on your stories so you can sell the use of them an be famous as hell =3 _Muninn Loves Huginn
| Reviewed By: MxDragon On: January 29, 2007 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first of all let me tell you that I´m a big fan of your work, although you are just starting as a fanfic writer I know you have potential. Style of Writing: I consider you use a lot of complex words and also japanese words but I don´t consider that to be a problem, in fact I think it helps the readers to inmerse themselves into this ninja alternate world... aka "Naruto´s World" Spelling and Grammar: I detected several spelling errors, that´s why I evaluated you with a 9, but hech, everybody makes mistakes, I might make mistakes myself when I finish writing this review lol... anyways another thing that was a bit confusing is that in one point of the story you say godaime hokage is a woman, but often you refer to her as a man. Originality/Creativity: up until now you have really amazed me with the story, the fact I put a 9 is not because I don´t like the story, its because I know you can still do better, its a way of encouraging you. Enjoyment Factor: Since I am a big fan of Naruto and I´m related with the characters that appear on the show I find this fanfic really entertaining. Overall Rating: I really think you deserve a 10, keep it up, someday you will be know all over mediaminer and probably the entire world wide web. Well, that is all for chapter one, I know you must be busy with wathever job consumes that much time from your life, but I will be waiting for chapter 2. Anime & Videogames for Life --> RPG´s Rule
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