| "Crazy for you" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: i read this... obviously
Reviewed By: bakura.is...:p On: October 26, 2011 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found this fanfic so captivating it drew me in rite till the very end . and thats hard for storys to do, even if your spellings made it hard to read sometimes ,[but then again i cant spell so i cant moan] it was good . i think you could make a sequel for this if you tryed .it could be about yami bakura (another mental patient who thinks he is a 3000 year old tomb robber) ... i havent thought of anything else though i hope you can write more in the future ,... you could try puppy,or tendershipping though . im not complaining cause i like deathshipping too...alot...and now im rabaling on ... alot anyway i hope you found this helpful keep writing the way you do because the style is very good .TX bye.. |
Title: Incredible!
Reviewed By: VLdemon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 22:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredibly well written; I finished it in just over two hours; couldn't stop reading! I can't believe english isn't your native language; this was awesome! Two thumbs up, and another thumb because Mariku made me laugh so much- "Can I tell him to go to hell?" XD
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Title: I Loved It!!!
Reviewed By: Youshiie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 17:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this Fanfiction!!! I thought you were very, very, very origional and i loved the way you played the characters! Please keep writing storys i love your work. Yet a gain, it was awsome!!!
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 11, 2007 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story, loved the plot line, took me 2 days to finsh, beautifully written; its plain to see that you put alot of work into this and it shows, again awsome job! :D
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Digi12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 19:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this! So origional and in-character! I like the plot-line and the way the characters interact, it seems very real. 10/10. Keep it up and I hope to read more soon. ^__^
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Title: Good work ^^
Reviewed By: ryoussuccubi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 14:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just realised you have an account on fanfiction.net and read it there >.< Dammit i cheated!I'll still read it here though because i have no life like that =D Keep updating x I still think its better when i read it here..do you change it or something? ^^; Heh,update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ryou's succubi On: January 27, 2007 16:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Didn't realise english wasn;t your national language,Sorry about that! Don't worry about the kissing scene it was fine,Not too much,Not too little.Always keeping us intrested ^^ Keep updating,Its so exiting!You never know whats going to happen next!Update soon =)
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Title: i can't be bothered to sign in..
Reviewed By: Ryou's succubi On: January 25, 2007 11:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter,be careful how you word it though.Don't rush your work.There was one line where i was really confused at what you meant. (And computers piss me off too,big time epecially photoshop 6.0 )The content was great!aw little Ryou falling for Marik =P Keep updating x
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Title: wooo^^
Reviewed By: ryoussuccubi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 13:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done,another good chapter.its killing me waiting..looks so good =D Good cliff hanger by the way adds to the effect of the fanfic never knowing what will happen next. Oh and study for your exams,i let that slip and got a d in english,i am now retaking english all over again and ive left school.So study hard,your the author we don't mind waiting ^^ *avoids the flaming torches that are thrown at her* heh.. ^^; update when you can and don't forget to study! >.
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Title: another brill chapter
Reviewed By: ryoussuccubi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 14:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done on another awesome chapter ^^ im glad you places Marik's anguish in there mixed with Ryou's it contrasts aainst the over chapter..i love it! keep writing! =D
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Title: another Good chapter
Reviewed By: ryoussuccubi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 14:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update ^_^ Its my favourite fanfic at the moment and your not writing pointless crap >.
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Reviewed By: Melissa brite On: January 11, 2007 02:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story and I love it. Its well written and the characters are just awesome. Ryou is just so innocent and cute. Mariku is very cool,insane,and sensual. The story is excellent so far, so keep writing. I can't wait to read what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: Melissa Brite On: January 04, 2007 02:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this fanfic. Please write more. I liked how innocent Ryou was and how psychotic Mariku was. I think they make a great couple. They are both so hot and they compliment each other very well.
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