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| "The Two Wars" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2009 02:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
this sounds like it will be interesting, i hope you continue it
| Reviewed By: momokolady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
good story, I like it, bye
| Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 04:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I think the worst thing about this fic is that you left it there! Come on! More! I'm usually rather skittish of GW/HP crossovers, but this one intruiges me, so of course, I MUST READ MORE! Your sp&gr aren't bad. They could use a good spellcheck or beta, but over all, there isn't much that could be fixed. The teaser will have my mind working overtime for a while, until I can read more. Personally, I'm waiting for Heero or one of the others to offer to off the Dursley's for Harry. After all, he doesn't need the protection charm anymore since it wears off this summer.... Can't wait for more. Neku
| Title: Calling Attention
Reviewed By: SirenNightMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 15:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for calling attention to that. The reason it was different was becuase I had started to write the srory last winter, but then pushed it to the side for a while and did not keep writing until this past summer.
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 12:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Specify, please, was it *a cold winter day in London* or * 'Another summer at the Dursley's'*?
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