| "Ichi no Tama" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: inuyasha_is_my_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon and you will be mucho loved! I will give you another big ass cookie... tempting, no? lol, but seriously... UPDATE SOON!!! -Your Fan, inuyasha_is_my_lover
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it very much so far! Nice characterisation and plot. Hope you update soon!
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Title: And another one
Reviewed By: Kelly Jo On: January 12, 2007 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I like how you don't rush the romance, but you keep the tension with Inu/Kag. Good job and Look forward to seeing more
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_is_my_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for updating!!! You are mucho loved! Update again soon! (This is like my favorite story on here so you don't know how happy I am that you updated!!!):) You get a cookie *hands you a big ass cookie*
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Reviewed By: Shadow~Magician [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 12:26 CST
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This is an absolutely fantastic story! You write very well, and the story is interesting with an original twist. You really capture the relationships between the characters in a realistic and fun approach, so good job with that! I really enjoy reading the story, so I hope you enjoy writing it because I would love to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaismyhero [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 12:21 CST
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really liking it. Hope to see more updates soon :) Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: inu - baby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 01:18 CST
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Yay! You updated again, and now you have to update once more!! This story is getting very intresting, so keep up the good work! Your loyal reader, inu - baby P.S. Update very soon please!
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Title: Hell Yes
Reviewed By: inuyasha_is_my_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fucking love your story so please update chappy 4 very very soon because you will be mucho loved!!!
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Title: INTERESTING
Reviewed By: KELLY JO On: January 01, 2007 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY. AND THE FACT THAT YOU UPDATE SO SOON. I ALSO LIKE THE TENSION BETWEEN THE TWO
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Reviewed By: inu - baby [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sounds like a very intresting fic!! ^_^ So please update soon I want to know what happens between Inuyasha and Kagome!! Your new loyal reader, inu - baby
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Reviewed By: Jake1184 On: December 29, 2006 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great story! Perhaps a stronger, more captivating summary would garner the attention of more readers and reviewers? After all, a summary is one of the first things a reader notices and then uses to determine whether the story is interesting or not. Not that your summary is bad, but given how beautifully you write and the IY-Kags dynamics and pseudo-marital situation you have set up (which is wonderfully done by the way), it definitely wouldn't hurt to incorporate that in the summary. Anyways, it's just a minor suggestion. So thanks for all the fast updates and I'm definitely looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
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Reviewed By: EMC On: December 29, 2006 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving what you have written so far. Though I'm not that good with construct crit. and such, all I can say is great start with the first three chapters and I do hope that lack of reviews on this site, given that it makes it nearly impossible or especially aggravating to leave a review, don't discourage you from posting more of this wonderful story. You've got Inuyasha and Kagome's characterizations down to a science and I can't wait to see how this story further develops. GL with your next update!
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Title: More More MORE
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 05:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is Blazin already. Perfect how you set up Inu and Kag in the coffee shop, it gave there second meeting a nice spark. OH, please continue on with this story is seems like it's going to be HOT. Update soon
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MERRY CHRISTMAS I love this story. I can't wait till the next update. :)
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