"I'm Buying" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: MASHfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 14:55 CDT Comment/Review: Cool. I'm more into Goren and Eames, but Logan and Wheeler are okay. I didn't get into them untill Wheeler came though. The other woman was boring. But this is a nice story.
| Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 01:20 CST Comment/Review: Not bad. I think that some of the speech tags were a little clunky and unnecessary. I like your Logan, but I kept wanting a little more with this piece. I almost want to say he needs to be a little more smart-alecky. I have to compliment you on the technical aspect of the story - thank you for knowing how to proof your own work ^_^. Thank you for sharing.
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