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"Cold Hearted Snake" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]

Reviewed By: xxbloodyriverxx On: November 06, 2009 06:40 CST
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Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10

Comment/Review:
I would suggest rewriting this fanfiction, or at least have a beta look over it, or better yet, do both. I would have enjoyed it if Mya did not seem so perfect. I believe the term is Mary Sue. Also, the writing itself could use some work. But otherwise, at least you spelled things correctly

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