| "The Curious Maruu" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Oh my god...
Reviewed By: Spirit-world-death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't spam. I post one review each chapter.
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Title: Uhh......
Reviewed By: Koneko-neechan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 13:44 CST
Comment/Review:
No spaming when doing reveiws please. ^^U
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Spirit-world-death [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
ARG! The elipsis doesn't show up on this site! okay make it three periods... NOT 4 NOT 2! three.
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Reviewed By: Spirit-world-death [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Note, At the end of a sentence in quotes, you either use a question mark, exclamation point, elipsis, or comma. NEVER a period. Periods are always replaced with commas. An elipsis is this "…" It is not typed with three periods, it is typed with option (alt) colon.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Spirit-world-death [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I have never flamed anything, I criticised it. DIFFERENCE. COMMON SENSE MUCH? Second, You switched point of view in the middle of the chapter...And you used HTML tags and thought they would work...
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Title: Excuse you?!
Reviewed By: Koneko-neechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 18:37 CST
Comment/Review:
How am I sexist?! I just don't like it when people flame my fanfics, it makes me feel bad...and if you want to block me, then do as you please, you're just actin' really immature. Don't you call anyone anything without any proof you got that? If you keep this up, you're gonna lose alot of friends by acting like this. Don't you call me sexist, cuz I ain't, you hear me?
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Reviewed By: Spirit-world-death [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 17:21 CST
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HAHAHAHAHA!!! Inbasul hates you! He just blocked you? You're sexist, I say that this is average and could use some improvement, you don't listen...someone else says it, you say, "Thanks for the comment!" I tell you what, This was a publicity stunt...I'M INBASUL!
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Title: Maybe, but...
Reviewed By: Koneko-neechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 16:41 CST
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Thank you for the addvice Solarity, but I'm really kinda use to writing my fanfictions this way. Well I guess I'll try it on my next Chapter okay? ^^
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Title: well.....
Reviewed By: Solarity the Hedgehog [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write it more like a book, not like a internet chat blog.It's better and will help you become a better writer!^-^
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Title: What do you think so far? ^^
Reviewed By: Koneko-neechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 17:07 CST
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Well this is my second fanfic on here sooo....like what do you think of it?? Is it good? I'm starting to get the hang of it now cuz I'm usally better at reading it or like making some on the TailsxCreams Boards, or RPing.^^ Please review my story!! ^^ And you could like give me some examples on what I should write in the next chap...or the chap after thechap I'm writing right now...whoa, to confusing...@w@
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