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Title: YOU SOOO GOT THIS WHOLE REPLICATOR THING FROM STAR GATE SG-1 AWSOME ANOTHER STAR DATE FAN!!!! YAY
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 20:51 CDT
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* DOES HAPPY DANCE*
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Phule [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 13:39 CDT
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nice update seems to read a little smoother now. still was wondering if nabiki dreamed all that would she forget everything? i would think she would remember some of it, and not act the way she did. also what happen to ryoga while he was with Set? anyways hope to see the story advance soon, that cliff hanger is a bit much for littling it sit for a few months. though i'm one to talk as my story hasn't moved much since i first posted :P ah well good luck with it :)
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Reviewed By: Alagon On: May 05, 2008 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
First.... I have to admit that I usually avoid your story's o_o; But in this case you were actually producing quite a good story up until the second chapter, at which point everybody seemed to fall well and truelly OOC. Still I've read all there is and I have to say that this one is at least an improvment on your previous work. Good luck with future fics, and I hope you eventually re-write this story into something far less hurried.
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Title: A bit massive
Reviewed By: Quontir [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you've done well so far, but it seems just a bit massive. I sorta liked it more when it was just SG-1 and Ranma...
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Title: ghost reader
Reviewed By: Forest Walker On: February 15, 2008 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The thing I like most about this story is its uniqueness, in so far as what I've read. I like this Ranma, although I would love for some way in the future for Ranma to remain comfortably in his male form for more than a few seconds. Not lose his female form, but get to at least an equal time share. Ranma sure has a LOT of work cut out for him/her.
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Title: Ahhhhhhh
Reviewed By: gato2006chile On: February 15, 2008 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see a update in the forum a then i see is only a rewrite of the first chapters, aaaaa. If you update the first chapter, then warnig if only a update of them
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Reviewed By: Fyorie Jusdyus Auricor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 06:23 CST
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Chapter 5's update seems out of synch with the rest of the story; what happened to Nabiki after she got the Goa'uld's genetic memory?
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Reviewed By: Lumster On: February 04, 2008 06:01 CST
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Well you seem to be in the middle of a rewrite of some kind, not sure exactly what you are changing so far but it is nice to see in some the earlier chapters you added more Ranma moments which were lacking to begin with. Seems like some mistake was made in chapter 6, it's nearly blank. I think you forgot to paste in the changes? Over all not sure what you are doing with the rewrite so far, but I hope you are in the process of cleaning up all the confusion from all the cross overs.
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Reviewed By: iö On: January 20, 2008 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good idea but too confusing for me 1. too many crossovers - what is star trek doing here? i skipped their parts tbh because i found their story to be unnecessary 2. too many plots/subplots going on at the same time 3. not enough ranma in it and generally not enough character development 4. small thing that i noticed in the earlier chapters: you seem to always confuse she/he her/him etc when talking about ranma this fic was not what i hoped it would be and i will not follow it anymore. please remeber that this is only my personal view i did not mean to offend you and im sure many people enjoy the story ;-) (sry for the spelling, english is not my first language)
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I wonder how Ryoga fits in. Interesting idea. Can't wait to see what happened to the Tendos.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 18:44 CST
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Holy crap, a guyver tie-in. Damn, and I'm still trying to find volumes 1-9 translated on the internet. Damnit. Anyway, love the story thus far (and it's about to get much, much more interesting. Hell, what if it was the replicators that made the Zoalords? Actually, that wouldn't make sense, why work with pathetically weak flesh? Nah, they'd choose to use em, and maybe discard em, though maybe it was the drowned replicator android that did the development of the Zoalords. Neh, an interesting question, to say the least. Anyway, update again soon, this story rocks! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: gelionlegends1 On: January 06, 2008 19:51 CST
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whoo now this is getting better and better just wonder how ranma will deal with the police and nabiki for what she has done. plus will ranma learn of chronos and the bio technology? that and the guyver and seeing how advanced her body is what would she be able to do with a g-unit or/and a creator ship? that and what about his human body would studying and learning as much about the g-unit could she advance it and adapt it to use on her/himself. plus will she meet up with guyver 1 and help them? heck where in the guyver timeline is this taking place what episode and is it the new series. well hope to see what happens in the next chapter and thanks for the great story.
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Title: Cahpter 10
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Nabiki the opportunist strikes once again. I hope she'll get hers in the end. Nice idea to add the Zoanoids and the Guyver to the mix. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Blackmamuth On: January 06, 2008 03:36 CST
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Where did Ranma find the stargate from?
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Title: photocopy
Reviewed By: spanky luvmonkey On: December 13, 2007 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am writing this review to say that this has been the most enjoyable ranma stargate sg1 fusion that i have come across save for the startrek but that is beside the point (don't like star trek) but the replactors have been my fav chars in sg1 and i will try and encourage the muses to continue to halp the ideas flow. Thank you for continuing the story i have enjoyed it immensly
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Title: Part 8
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. So Ranma is looking for her sister. Hmm... an OC or someone that appeared in one of the crossovers you use?
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 13:04 CST
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yay, update! Anyway, thanks for updating, this is getting, complicated. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Caleb On: November 12, 2007 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very original crossover, and with impressive potential and complexity. A very original ranma character, keep writing this one!
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Reviewed By: cnwjr On: November 12, 2007 09:45 CST
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Very interesting concept. This story has potential, but the massive crossover element is already starting to be annoying. I will monitor this to see if it lives up to its potential, but I already have my doubts.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 19:01 CST
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This fic is hard to describe, the basic idea is brilliant perhaps the most orginal Ranma spring ever. Yet ranma, let alone male ranma has yet to really make an appearance in this fic. Over all I think you are crossing to many worlds over to fast, with to many characters taking the main spot light. I think things might of turned out a little better if you focused onto Ranma and what was happening around him/her. You have so many vilians, heros, and unkowns floating about it's total chaos with no real goal insight. Chaos can be fun... but uncontrolled chaos rarely turns out well in xover fics.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you haven't forgotten Ranma. Great like always.
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot thickens. Another fine chapter, except there's no Ranma. Oh well, maybe next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ice-Tea-1983 On: October 21, 2007 18:02 CDT
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I apologise, while I find this story entertaining, it is becoming much to "Crackish" for my tastes.
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Reviewed By: James963 On: October 19, 2007 18:58 CDT
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A somewhat interesting story goes down in flames due to excessive crossovers; which is a pity since it was fairly original. A couple of other points in general: You can't seem to make up your mind whether to use male or female pronouns when Ranma is in female form; personally I prefer it if the appropriate gender pronoun is used for Ranma's current body; it makes it easier to remember which body he/she is in. You use pony-tailed entirely to often to describe Ranma.
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Reviewed By: notBald [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 12:52 CDT
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Hmm, looks like there are more forces at work than just Ranma. I suspect Cologne will come to regret her decision.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this chapter. I appreciate what you've done to Kuno.
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Reviewed By: notBald [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 01:57 CDT
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Seems like someone is building an army. But is it Ranma? I suppose it is, but can't be too sure.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent idea to add Star Trek to the mix. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: AK_Kuma On: September 14, 2007 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic! Can't wait for the next chapter. Style is easy to follow, I didn't notice any misspelling or such, but i'm not the best at that anyways so take that with a grain of salt. Really nice story so far with a quick pace. Over all one of the better story ideas i've read in a long time. the others out there seem to be a rinse and repeat type, so its nice to get something completely new :)
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: notBald [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:03 CDT
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Having Ranma fall into the spring of drowned replicator is ingenious. But how can a robot drown? :P. Looking forwards to Ranma flexing her muscles in the universe. Even more to when Ranma meets up with the other replicators, or for that sake the Asgaar.
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