| "Unstoppable Love" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: halfbreed-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 21:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked the sequal with the lemon. in some stories a lemon makes sence to do and ties up with the story really well, like yours :D I can't for you to post more Kira and Lacus stuff like this
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Reviewed By: 118-sethshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Putting a lemon at the beginning? That's a little too much if you ask me; you should save those, even if this is a sequel. Well, it's still a good story; I like it so far. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: **lacus yamato** On: January 05, 2007 13:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! You wrote the lemon! :D It's nice. You got some mistakes though. Anyways, when are you gonna update "Destiny of Love"?
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Reviewed By: spitfireX On: January 03, 2007 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
very nicely done, whoa that was sexy
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