| "Shokushu Ninja: Uzumaki Naruto" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: rikuuchiha On: October 28, 2007 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You most write more! I love this crossover, how come you didn't continue it?
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Reviewed By: snowecat32 On: June 26, 2007 00:15 CDT
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Wow, too bad you stopped, this is really great. Naruto is a fuzz-brain and Sakura needs to get slimed!! Wonder what Sasuke would do with a demon? Hope you someday come back to this.
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bows before him and his original idea* You must write more, and SOON!
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Title: clilc
Reviewed By: clilc [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 18:31 CST
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I usually don't like crossovers and I was never really fond of La Blue Girl but for some reason I really like this lol. Please continue when you're able too. (Btw, nice work with Hinata lol)
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:36 CST
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HOORAY FOR PERVESION! Keep this going!
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Reviewed By: otakutron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the most interesting crossover i have ever read please update
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Reviewed By: servant of Shukaku On: January 14, 2007 16:34 CST
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Y'know Kyuubi's tails look a lot like...tentacles
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Reviewed By: sevant of Kyuubi On: January 14, 2007 16:31 CST
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The "god of perversion" was Slaanesh, from the "Warhammer" setting, right? Are Sakura and the orange slime going to develope a bond?
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Reviewed By: sevant of Kyuubi On: January 14, 2007 01:39 CST
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Y,know the blood is used up as a "sacrifice", for the sommoning technique, so the floor wouldn't bloody.
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Title: Heh
Reviewed By: AJTalon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect tens the whole way through. I hope you update soon. And while I dislike Sakura, you at least keep her in the story, heh heh heh... Argh, I'm such a perv... But at least I'm in good company.
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Reviewed By: Glorfy On: January 07, 2007 04:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoo! another excellent chapter. hot, too. allow your pervertid ways to guide you, young one, and create more chapters! an order from your reader! err, well i hope you accept orders anyways. or i might be reduced to sitting arround waiting for you to update or something
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Reviewed By: otakutron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best crossover i have read
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Title: Exelent
Reviewed By: Capito Celcior [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A most exelent fanfic. I've never seen La Blue Girl or read it, but have heard a lot about it and read a lot about it. My guess (and hope) is that Naruto will soon go to Makai to learn and be intructed about said sexual arts and combat techniques. And I agree. Hinata can be WAAAAY cuter than Sakura. Very much dislike the bitch. Also, perhaps Naruto should eventualy gain other powers as well from his demon allies (perhaps even eternal youth? Though not for a long time)
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Title: Ooooooh!
Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 22:29 CST
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I've never seen la blue girl but I've heard alot about it from my ppl. They say it's awesome, and I think this fic is on the road to greatness. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Z [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting! I haven't seen any Naruto/La Blue Girl crossovers, and with the use of Summoning as the primary plot device, it works excellently. No technical problems seen. Now at this point, I'm almost salivating at the though of "Tentacle Naruto" and Hinata... Regardless of where you take this story, I can't wait to see how it develops.
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