"Shokushu Ninja: Uzumaki Naruto" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 12:23 CDT Comment/Review: You ever gonna update this fic? Because it is fun. So, update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Title: keep it goin Reviewed By: stingrey33 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 17:07 CDT Comment/Review: dude i loved the story . please continue the storyit rocks. keep up the good work
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Title: Come On!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 20:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Dude are you there hello!!!!!!!!!!!!!!? Come on write more this is great what more do you want. I can give you money.
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Reviewed By: SSTR87 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 01:45 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow! I haven't read a Naruto story this well put together since Just Won't Die! I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: rikuuchiha On: October 28, 2007 18:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You most write more! I love this crossover, how come you didn't continue it?
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Reviewed By: snowecat32 On: June 26, 2007 00:15 CDT Comment/Review: Wow, too bad you stopped, this is really great. Naruto is a fuzz-brain and Sakura needs to get slimed!! Wonder what Sasuke would do with a demon? Hope you someday come back to this.
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 12:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *bows before him and his original idea* You must write more, and SOON!
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Title: clilc Reviewed By: clilc [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 18:31 CST Comment/Review: I usually don't like crossovers and I was never really fond of La Blue Girl but for some reason I really like this lol. Please continue when you're able too. (Btw, nice work with Hinata lol)
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:36 CST Comment/Review: HOORAY FOR PERVESION! Keep this going!
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Reviewed By: otakutron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 11:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is the most interesting crossover i have ever read please update
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Reviewed By: servant of Shukaku On: January 14, 2007 16:34 CST Comment/Review: Y'know Kyuubi's tails look a lot like...tentacles
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Reviewed By: sevant of Kyuubi On: January 14, 2007 16:31 CST Comment/Review: The "god of perversion" was Slaanesh, from the "Warhammer" setting, right? Are Sakura and the orange slime going to develope a bond?
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Reviewed By: sevant of Kyuubi On: January 14, 2007 01:39 CST Comment/Review: Y,know the blood is used up as a "sacrifice", for the sommoning technique, so the floor wouldn't bloody.
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Title: Heh Reviewed By: AJTalon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 02:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Perfect tens the whole way through. I hope you update soon. And while I dislike Sakura, you at least keep her in the story, heh heh heh... Argh, I'm such a perv... But at least I'm in good company.
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Reviewed By: Glorfy On: January 07, 2007 04:06 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Whoo! another excellent chapter. hot, too. allow your pervertid ways to guide you, young one, and create more chapters! an order from your reader! err, well i hope you accept orders anyways. or i might be reduced to sitting arround waiting for you to update or something
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