| "Fetish? What's A Fetish?" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Title: When...
Reviewed By: Whoever On: February 27, 2010 17:08 EST
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Some of you mght consider this as spam, i agree but i would like to know when the next chapter is coming. You can give a time fram...minus the 1 month that has passed so far. You say you read all reviews/comments, don't let me down. As to the pairings, I wont ask or beg honestly i dont care just please let it turn out good. It seems even though you says you have no plot, one has been building in a way, and to quote you 'if you have to ask you dont need to know'. Please respond.
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Reviewed By: The5567 On: January 29, 2010 21:28 EST
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I found the last chapter good, but not great, but this chapter just blew the hell out of everything and more than made up for it. Nice job and keep up the great work... Wonder if Orichimaru is gonna enter Sasuke...
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 19:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was disturbing, but it was disturbingly hilarious at the same time, while as a NaruHina fan I'm kind of disappointed that this chapter wasn't about Naruto and Hinata, but as a man who loves funny things I really didn't even care after two paragraphs. And Orochimaru's "entering" made me cry laughing. I honestly can't wait to see what happens next. But, take your time, comedy of this level takes genius and genius takes time.
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Reviewed By: Saiyan Prince1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 04:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol a fool to the end. i think naruto should run into her and she teaches him the same things she thought the sas man.
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Reviewed By: Saiyan Prince1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2010 05:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now this is some of the best stuff i have read in a long time. keep it going
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Reviewed By: Kabbit On: January 15, 2010 00:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only reached the chapter about flying toys. I couldn't stop laughing the entire chapter, and I couldn't breath because I was laughing so hard when Naruto said that he could have used a tampon, that he wanted his own, and when Shikamaru was running away thinking about the sexy jutsu. I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story. Nothing is happening to Naruto directly so far and it doesn't seem actully dirty, but it's funny as hell and the implied thoughts are hilarious!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2009 14:08 EST
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This is coming together quite nicely. I look forward to the ball!
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Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2009 23:43 EST
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Ha! Great stuff. Each line is springloaded. Loved the Ninja attorney and the goth-trap move at the end.
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 14:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you come out on top. I have been waiting so long for this chapter and it did not disappoint. And Neji winning over Ayame by being emo was an awesome touch. Emos always get the girls. I await the next time you decide to spill pure awesome onto the pages.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: cdog21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2009 05:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Let's see I can help you grab your kitty." I was expecting another synonym to be used instead, but hey to each his own. And Hiashi is her dad's name, I think his brother was named Hizashi (pretty sure it's right, but spelling might be off)
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Reviewed By: The5567 On: November 08, 2009 00:22 EST
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Just found that the fic had been updated (Oh how my heart soared!^.^... 2 months w/o an update... -.-) anyway, I'm loving this though I'm still gonna pray that Naruto doesnt end up with Sakura by a twist of fate... Unless a new female character is introduced though, it seems Ino would be the only alternative since Hinata is sooo....Hinata
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2009 14:07 EDT
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I personally thought it was a really good update. I liked how you tied in the Micheal Jackson song, I'm going to have to listen to that on my way to work now. I thought it was even funnier how Naruto reacted to the image. Little things inside the chapter did make me laugh and I understand your need to hold off on the chapters too, feel free it's ok. No one blames you. Well, I guess I can't speak for everyone, but I don't. Great job!
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2009 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude I thought yu were gone forever, but I'm glad to see you back and still good as ever. I hope you update sooner next time, but don't worry, I'll always read this, it's awesome.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 15:09 EDT
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That was a great update. You did really well to get back intouch with the story. I must say that the end of this chapter was really unexpected. LOL Poor, poor Sakura. LOL! But what can I say, I don't really care for her but in this story she makes it so interesting. I hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: kazjun On: September 16, 2009 01:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this fic but thought it was dead. Made my day to see I was wrong. Hope this means you'll update this more :)
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