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| "Next Time" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: StarTrekObsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my god, that was hot...! Yummy! :D
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Reviewed By: me On: January 02, 2007 14:38 CST
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that was fun! i was expecting ichiro to make a bigger scene than that since he is such a crazy stalker, but perhaps this is not the last we've heard from him. i love your yohji and aya characterizations, very fun.
| Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 20:24 CST
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i'd already read this on LJ...but oooh I still love! Possessive Aya's have their own charm
| Reviewed By: kinukitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 11:10 CST
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A lovely trilogy, filled with lots of nice details, humor, and, or course, sex. I loved the "slight catch in Aya's breathing betraying his lack of indifference," and Aya continuing to say no as he "tracks Yoji's movements automatically, his lips parting." Also Ichiro seeming "imprevious to every variation of curt." And then - oh, the seduction; oh, the handcuffing; the lock-picking; the eep!ing... the, er, present from the ex-flame (especially that; made me laugh out loud). Then the "I'm glad that's finally sorted out" - funny. And the end - predatory. Yes. Grrr!
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