| "Helping a Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: jyanx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, and I love seing minor characters get into the action. The twist at the end was perfect go Kon!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god i did not see that coming what a twist at the end that was kon the whole time thats funny as hell please you have to continue with what happends later please you have too wow that was really good
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 22:55 CST
Comment/Review:
omg lol i loved that twist.omg you have to have it continued!! LMAO!!! i loved!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that was AWESOME! It was described so perfectly i could see it in my head without ANY flaws! lmfao, i absolutely LOVE the twist you did at the end. That is hylarious!
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