| "Gone" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, and the song was a perfect fit for this story. I really like the line "and life's not blowing her kisses thanks to you" it fits so perfectly because it's totally his falt that her life is no longer sweet and happy. I love the way you blended the actions in the story so perfectly to the actions in the song. It was very well done.
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Reviewed By: aisho [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww, it was so sad, good, but so sad. I can't believe Amon did that to here, jerk :) Oh the power of a story. Good job, I liked it.
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Title: Gone
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: JdWheels [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. I bow once more. Hope you like my new one "A wife for Amon?" Lov ya. JdWheels
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Title: Gone
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Your story....Rocks!!
Reviewed By: JdWheels [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply stunning in it's greatness. I bow to you my little WHR princess. Simply the best one shot I have read in a long while. ( Giving many low bows in respect )
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