Reviewed By:Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 13:36 CST Comment/Review: "Quadrant" seems a little too startrekky for this. "were" he in a talkative mood "Warlord" is one word. You don't need a comma before "yet far more brutal." It's a coordinating conjunction preceeding a non-independent clause. If it was their ritual for centuries, up until the Inupapa died, then maybe you should refer to Sesshou getting older.
