Reviewed By: tenshi_no_saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 17:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Frightening. Though the fright factor is a little diminished by having to scroll back and forth to read it... *curses MM.org*
Anyway, nice little ficlet. The single, large paragraphs are a bit hard to decipher, but... oh, well. Keep writing! ^_^x
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