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"Understanding" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Zak Myo  On: April 21, 2004 12:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
For starters,Lain is not ugly.The rest of the stuff you got dead on.With the exception of the Chisa part.Sure she became part of the Wired and everything but her and Lain weren't really friends.The only way that they truly know each other is because Lain talked to her after she died and Lain and Chisa both walked home together a while before Chisa died.*points to self.*Biggest fan right here.
 Reviewed By: tenshi_no_saiyajin [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 15, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Frightening. Though the fright factor is a little diminished by having to scroll back and forth to read it... *curses MM.org*

Anyway, nice little ficlet. The single, large paragraphs are a bit hard to decipher, but... oh, well. Keep writing! ^_^x

~Tenshi no Saiyajin (Sessha - FanFiction.Net)

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