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| "Eternal Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Niere [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Duo did say that he and Wufei were going to 'disappear'. The story also mentioned thay they were going to be risking their lives. Those nanobots were good, but Wasn't that expecting/hoping for a bit much? I bet they were very hard pressed to repair *that* damage! Hmm, I wonder if they got all the parts in the right bodies... Maybe a bit of Duo in Wufei and vice versa? Loved the story and hope for a sequel!
| Reviewed By: Crazy_Lil_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
That's the end?? Are you planning a sequel? Because that was a very sudden ending, and there is a lot left unexplained, such as what happened to everyone afterwards or what exactly Relena had been planning to do. Your writing style is very good & the plot was interesting & original, but i felt that you could have expanded it more. But all in all, it was an enjoyable story & i do look forward to any other work that you may do ^_^
| Reviewed By: Hikaru Itsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm sure you love to leave cliffies ¬¬ gosh it is so good, the whole plot is really good, I like, I'll be waiting for the next chapter
| Reviewed By: Crazy_Lil_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic is really good. I've enjoyed the story so far & am eager to see where it goes next. Keep up the good work & i look forward to your next update.
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