| "The Concrete Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: The name of Itachi's Mangekyo sharringan
Reviewed By: Zoisyte On: September 09, 2009 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like what I read so far except the way you put the sentences together and the grammar. The way you writ it is TSUKIYOMI
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 22:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
don;t worry about how short they are as long as u update. The ideas will come soon, trust me. Great story by the way.
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Title: ......
Reviewed By: obsidiandeath On: July 11, 2008 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're chapters are way to short to be called anything but paragraphs.. and you're story is too short to be called anything but a summary.
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Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: July 10, 2008 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job on tis story~ ;D Please update!!~ It's AWESOME!! XD
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay you update dot worrie about ur ideas they will all flow one day i cry tears for i know that you will do well *tears*
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh!!! >_< i so love your fic! ♥ by the way you spelled itachi's sharingan attack wrong -> its spelled tsukiyomi and its kind of confusing when they're talking at time >_< may you please put them in seperate paragraphs...? Please update sooon~ ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sessymate13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you all so much,you've inspired me with your comments,I am going to start writing right now:skips off to write:
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAY SASUNARU YAAAY LOTS OF LOVE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it alot plez update soon kay
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Title: the mask gone
Reviewed By: xXEMO_GRILXx On: July 16, 2007 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really, really good! i enjoyed it soo much, please make another chapter!
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Reviewed By: wolfram01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 10:21 CST
Comment/Review:
that was so sweet and cute!!!!! please update soon I just want to know what happens next. You also did a excellent job on the fic well done!!!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 22:51 CST
Comment/Review:
this is really good. i hope u update this soon. plz.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
That was so sweet, I just love it when ever Naruto has someone love him!! keep up the good!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 09:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty good!
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