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| "Maruu Madness: Maruu Party 1" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Needs work...
Reviewed By: Spirit-world-death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're getting better at writing...But like I said before, If you have something like: "Nice skillz." He said. That's wrong. Is should be one of these: "Nice skillz!" He said "Nice skillz..." He said "Nice skillz," He said. No periods. ONLY when it's the end of the ENTIRE sentance. NOT the QUOTED sentence.
| Title: What do y'all think?
Reviewed By: Koneko-neechan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 14:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, what do you guys think? I'm starting to write it more like a book now and give s'more detail, I'm gonna start writing more so I can please y'all and get s'more reviews and comments. And please don't flame--I'm doing the best that I can okay? Please R&R ^^ They keep me motivated.
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