| "The Wolf of Flowers" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: ToboeLover On: July 16, 2008 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting storyline. Fun to read and easy to relate to the characters!
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Reviewed By: ToboeLover On: July 15, 2008 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really interesting fanfiction. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: kurai-kitsune On: April 21, 2008 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a good story update soon plz
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 00:11 CST
Comment/Review:
lol......Looked like it was going to be such a good fic to ....saddly it looks like you havent updated it ....sigh to bad
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Reviewed By: DeathImpalesYou On: July 15, 2007 05:14 CDT
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This is so good so far, please update soon and keep up the good work. :)
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oooooo me likey. keep updating plz :3 i was kinda thrown for a loop when chap2 was updated on the 23rd and the 3rd on the 4th... lol sorry about the low grammer score, but you could use a beta
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Reviewed By: blkwolf1 On: April 14, 2007 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! Totally LOVE your story so far!!! PLEASE update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Satella On: April 10, 2007 16:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am interested in the plot, and I love this pairing so much. May I make a few criticisms though to improve your writing? I believe writing is never completely finished because a person could always revise and do better. First, try reading over and out loud your previous, and future, chapters. It's a really good way to check for spelling and grammar. Your fanfic could be even better if you fixed your misspelled words. Second, try adding more description. A better description of the setting would be awesome. For example, instead of a forest, make it a dark forest with trees that reach towards the sky, only allowing streams of light to peak through the cracks between its canopy. I was also wondering why the soldiers chose to attack Kagome so quickly. People like Quent traveled a little throughout the anime without too much of a problem. Try giving the soldiers more reason to attack without making Kagome seem like a rabid dog. Still, your fanfic was good enough to catch my eye so please post another chapter soon, and consider my suggestions.
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: adaregirl On: April 09, 2007 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I loved your fanfiction story. My favorite show is Naruto, and I love kiba. he is just soooooooo hot. My sister's favorite show is Inuyasha. Please never put the @#$%^ Kikyo in the story thank you. adaregirl
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bring her MIKO POWER'S to light plz!!!!
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Title: Shinagami Darkness
Reviewed By: Death Note Maker On: February 03, 2007 08:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far! plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 ..... LOVE IT..........
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Reviewed By: NemoisEmo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good fanfic!please update!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LCAR [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Come on come on i really want to now what happens next
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 07:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like it and hope you update soon ^^
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