| "I tried to be a good girl" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: June 27, 2002 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gurl! I gave you 10 all da way!!!! Do yo thang! I usually don't like it when Vegeta's alittle OCC but I LUVED THIS PARTICULAR ONE!!!!!! lol. Can't wait 4 da next chappie! And ppl review damnit!!! Review!!!!! Shay gurl, and I'm out. |
Reviewed By: Yatsuna On: June 25, 2002 01:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe too laazy to sign in Neways ahem...YOU ARE EVIL, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE LIKE TOMARROW OR I'LL BLAST YOUR ASS TO KINGDOM COME! *clears throught and smiles innocently* hehehehe I mean please update soon.^^
-Yatsuna |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 17:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like, i like. You have got to get the next chapters out quick! ^_^ Also, your a bad, bad gurl for doing that! Giving everybody a cliffhanger... it just isn't right! *smile* I'm kidding, just don't do it next time! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: holly On: June 23, 2002 08:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just started reading your story and couldn't stop until it was over! I hope you're going to write the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Yatsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Me likey this Ficcy!^^ *cough* I mean um this is a great story so far I can't wait until the next ball so please hurry with the updates!
-Yatsuna |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
The chapter was great! Please update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Shateera On: June 19, 2002 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just wanted 2 say I like dis fic and u should be getting way more reviews then what u got! I wanted 2 say ur fic is creative and I hope u decide 2 finsih it. shay so holla back @ Shateera40@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Una Persona On: May 25, 2002 14:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
pretty good but everything is happening SOO fast. Slow it down and u got a great fic here. |
Reviewed By: Vegeta's queen On: May 21, 2002 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOh the fanfic was great! but PLEAZE update soon, i can't wait for it! ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Adri On: May 19, 2002 23:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holland must be cool, I wouldn't mind wooden shoes even if they were a stereotype :D
Cute story, keep writting! |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: May 19, 2002 11:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
ASAP means As Soon As Possible and im STILL loveing this fic
need...more...NOW*runs around going crazy*,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: May 18, 2002 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOU TURD YOU STOPED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :( i was really looking forword to the next Ch. :( ... :D oh well i can wait. but not for long.
need more ASAP
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey chiara this a really great fic and keep posting this way and ill stay happily satified
*woo hoo |
Reviewed By: holly On: June 23, 2002 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
The last chapter was really too short *g* Hope you'll write the next one soon! |
Reviewed By: Yatsuna On: June 23, 2002 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooooo Vegeta's getting Frisky! This chapp was a bit short but oh well plz hurry with the next!
-Yatsuna |
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