| "I tried to be a good girl" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 18:53 CST
Comment/Review:
WHEN YOU GET BACK FROM AMERICA, YOU ARE WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER, NO BUTS! Don't worry, I'll probably find some way to make you write, even if I have pretty much no clue who you are. So hurry up with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 04, 2002 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great I mean GREAT! story. I love the tension between the two love birds. Although I kinda feel sorry for Zarbon (just a little)I wanna see how Vegeta tries to make up to Bulma and how Bulma takes it being the hot head she is. Oh well, told ya how I love the fic so don't stop.
Please?........ |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
he people I`m the writer of this fic and I`m back from Orlando.This weekend youre going to get the next chap.Sooooooo THANKS FOR THE REVIEWS YOU MADE MY DAY |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving your story so much! Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 09:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! Please update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 15:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, I hate Zarbon and Freiza...anyways...continue soon!! Damn Vegeta's an asshole....haha.. hope u continue!! NOW!! DO IT NOW |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 13:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. Great new chapter. I feel so bad for Veggie! Well... I was his falt though... *sigh* poor veggie.... But it'll all end well! ... Won't it? -_-;; |
Reviewed By: ~*Monomo~*~Tsukino*~ On: July 02, 2002 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! Great story so far and I really enjoy the plot. Keep up the great work and add up the next chapter please!
Thanx~
~*Monomo~*~Kachi~*~Tsukino*~
AKA ~*Momo*~ |
Reviewed By: Shateera On: June 29, 2002 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo,wussup? Just wanted 2 say I'm diggin this chappie and that I can't wait 4 da next one. Way 2 go gurl. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 14:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was great! You gotta update soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: June 27, 2002 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gurl! I gave you 10 all da way!!!! Do yo thang! I usually don't like it when Vegeta's alittle OCC but I LUVED THIS PARTICULAR ONE!!!!!! lol. Can't wait 4 da next chappie! And ppl review damnit!!! Review!!!!! Shay gurl, and I'm out. |
Reviewed By: Yatsuna On: June 25, 2002 01:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe too laazy to sign in Neways ahem...YOU ARE EVIL, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE LIKE TOMARROW OR I'LL BLAST YOUR ASS TO KINGDOM COME! *clears throught and smiles innocently* hehehehe I mean please update soon.^^
-Yatsuna |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 17:10 CDT
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I like, i like. You have got to get the next chapters out quick! ^_^ Also, your a bad, bad gurl for doing that! Giving everybody a cliffhanger... it just isn't right! *smile* I'm kidding, just don't do it next time! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: holly On: June 23, 2002 08:09 CDT
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I just started reading your story and couldn't stop until it was over! I hope you're going to write the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Yatsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 19:13 CDT
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Me likey this Ficcy!^^ *cough* I mean um this is a great story so far I can't wait until the next ball so please hurry with the updates!
-Yatsuna |
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